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You before me, angelic, this vision.
Why do dark tears fall
from those brown eyes, so beautiful?

Why does your face shy from my eyes,
and shroud itself with the hair,
through which I run my fingers?

For what reason, to what cause,
do your limbs tremble in my absence,
and discover tensity in my presence?

Good God, use your lips,
before mine reach them,
as your silence gives consent.

Speak the mind which fascinates my ears,
Spill out the heart that grips tight to my soul.
Bare the soul that mine is forever meant for.

I wish to love you more than you could comprehend,
and purge every trace of affliction...
Bare the soul that mine is forever meant for.
You know you can talk to me. I love you more than anything.


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SparrowsFlame Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy cow. Breathtaking. What an amazing piece. :wow:
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maybemyranda Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
I love love love! that the bodies make an infinity symbol :)
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Hazelmallorn Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Writer
Oh...this is amazing. Great job!! :D
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Romana201 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is indescribably beautiful. It's wonderful. I enjoyed it.
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JossArt0 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Nicee!!
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SGTCbrittanySGTC Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student General Artist
god yes. i love it.
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Shurely Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Whoa, it's so beautiful and serene!
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NaiVianne Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
very touching, indeed! super-wonderful-beautiful-lovely
thank you for sharing this!
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liliCartMan Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist
how stupid I am: piece, not "poetry"
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
What are you talking about? This is poetry...?
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