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Watching, my eyes saw the swaying limbs
thin and starved by winter winds...
Dancing, like moving cracks on the window,
Through which I did stare.

Imagine, the image so morbid above as I gazed.
unnerving to the anchoring blood,
drying up within the veins of my limbs,
much like the branches that sliced the air...

The roots dug deep into my back,
and the anchored blood began to freeze...
My vessels, destroyed by glaciers,
of icy blood, that once flowed.

The travesty, of the bullet plunged into my heart,
whose beat slows, and withers and fades.
Too and so soon, the loss of my life...
Now I play the game of patience...
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candi-dish Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional Artist
Your descriptive imagery is beautiful! Have you been composing poems for a long time now?
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it's been a work in progress since around the 7th grade and I'm a freshmen in college now haha
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flutterlicious20 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wish I couls add this to favorites 200 more times
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha I wish you could too! :P
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flutterlicious20 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol! :)
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flutterlicious20 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*could
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the-soulseeker-vio Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
DANG, this is so amazing!! I :icondevilheartplz: it!
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springrose1995 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Just beautiful
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ayala1001 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Feels so twisted inside...its pretty original!
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rachel-morgan Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
this is interesting. i love the visual aspects of it... i could see and feel it all happening. very nicely written.
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