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To my one and only, the beloved whom my heart favors...
For my all & every
The true love my soul has at last found.

I continue onward, producing letters
To grow into words,Words that still yet
lack ability to describe this, our love.

Though my mind works with vigor,
through day until night,
Evermore to the dying beat of my heart.

Remolded have I been,
and forever grasped...
By a bond beyond unbreakable.

The Heart that drums away the beat in hopes
of reaching the ears of some muse...
In hopes of fabricating my rapture...

Right away I write away,
direct from my inner most being,
Out poured to pages for the eyes of my angel.
Just more words for the woman I love.
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ChibiOtakuSama Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
i feel the same way about my boyfriend :iconawwwplz: ... his name is Angel btw :giggle:
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well feel free to read this to him haha
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ChibiOtakuSama Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
lol :iconblushplz:
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow dude, from a woman's point of view that was absolutely beautiful pure emotion. It tugged at my heart strings. I absolutely love
the last stanza. Best of luck to you both.
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Saikotsunami Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
damn dude, I'm reading this on my 10 year anniversary of having met the woman of my dreams. I know how you feel. Rather than comment further however, I'd better get back to work preparing her little surprise. Best wishes to the both of you as well ;D
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CaylinR Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
it's beautiful.
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Writer
This poem is beautiful! :) She must be a very lucky woman~
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Limro Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Do you have a link for the picture full size?
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No sorry, I saved it a long time ago and I don't remember from where...I DO however recall that it's a phone screensaver so that should help you haha
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PeytonJune Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Beautiful
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xXNamaste Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love this :heart:
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Dawnfad Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
right in the feels :P makes me think of someone i know
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sumgie1 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
That's sweet. :)
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red1699 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
wow this is an amazing poem. I know how you feel, I love my fiance very much
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
We're young, but I can't wait to marry her someday. Congratulations to you and your fiance! Maybe you can read this at your wedding hahahaha :)
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red1699 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
that be cool. I can't wait to marry my fiance either
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well I'm happy for both of you
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red1699 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Thank you. She's my world and I love her
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lucky woman <3
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DarthSithari Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
Your a sad lovesick little man... makes me wish I had a girlfriend.
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha I'm happy, but I'm sure you'll find a girl someday
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DarthSithari Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
Well I did write this stupid little poem about my dream girl about five or six months ago.
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well just be yourself and leave it up to fate:)
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DarthSithari Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
Somehow I get the feeling that being myself has been keeping any Ideal Girls away.

I mainly try to keep my head down and avoid getting my head blown off.
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol well try to get into stuff like psychology. Mainly things like body language as well as just how you present yourself. It helped me out a lot.
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DarthSithari Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
Maybe, but let's face it these days you can't find a good girl under every rock. I mean, well if it were that simple I'd activly try to find that perfect someone.
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha yeah that's a pretty valid point, and I got really lucky, but if there's one, there's more out there just waiting. Don't misunderstand me though, she's unique in a way, to me and the way I am. That being said, I could NEVER hope to find someone else like her.
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