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And what if for you I built a garden?
In there where we would know a private freedom,
The priceless peace without end,
And a patch of Heaven to cover the bruises of time.

There you would find all your dreams of us,
And then more to add as we go along,
Skimming carelessly over the grass…
Free without shame, hand in hand in love.

And what if I grew for you the flowers of all your favorite colors?
Blossomed and alive, their scent filling the air…
I would create a beating heart in its center,
A pond of warm stone, and a fountain to give it life.

I would lay with you in a hammock beneath the shade,
holding close the love that is my own,
feeling every beat of the happy heart,
and allowing my eyes to shut to let my senses roam.

All around would we here nothing but the song of nature,
And the passion of the connection between us…
Therein where we can recreate Eden with our hands,
Our laughter, our touch, our tears, our love…resonate
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:iconskyeyedangel:
wow i couldn't stop reading this with a powerful feeling you did a great job
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:icongrubbswriting:
~GrubbsWriting Feb 10, 2013  Professional Writer
haha thank you so much!
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Mood: Adoration ~AngelWorks24 Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it :) nice job
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AJ: I love it. You write very well. :)
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Mood: Joy ~GrubbsWriting Jan 19, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you!
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:icondarthsithari:
Off hand I'd say that the best way to get this: Get a space ship, about 250 people unafraid of some hard honest work, and a pretty habbitable planet with an equally pretty sky.
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~GrubbsWriting Jan 19, 2013  Professional Writer
haha wow
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:icondarthsithari:
What? It's a good idea!... a little unrealistic but it's a good idea.
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