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The charismatic recluse
with a loner's philosophy.
Birds of a feather,
the punishments that I endure,
I cannot work beneath
these pressures,
The know-nothing status
in the search for myself
Goes on with trial & error...
All in all, I am merely awaiting
my own return.
On inner struggles.


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Blood-Red-Cure Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome picture, awesome title, awesome poem. Overall wonderful, and a great way to describe myself.
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albinoskittles Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
awesome piece, but whats with the name?
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Originally it was going to be about writer's block, but basically, I chose it because I express all of my inner struggles and such through my writing.When I write, my hands tend to get really cramped and achy, sort of how a cannon can get overheated. I relate the concept of a cannon to how my ideas burst into my writing from my head to my hand, to the paper or keyboard. The overkill part refers to all the inner struggles that I'm writing about and how they really take a toll on me. Does that make sense? lol
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albinoskittles Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
that's so deep, and i never would have thought of it that way. writers block is horrendous, I'm currently under gamers block with my games, but this website really helps out with any kind of creative block :) and so does this piece.
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Another tactic you might try is just flipping through random pages of dictionary, a thesaurus, and any symbolism dictionary. That helped me start my new mini-series of poems, the first one being "The Black Rose"
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BlurrHog Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
A fish out of water was heard to have said "Its alot dryer atleast"
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vicb0t Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
glad to find someone who understands
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Bookworm-Next-Door Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
Amazing
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DxxJeske Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
When your on the other side, you really wish to know of the side you left.
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pokemonfart Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Student Writer
Ugh. Did I have pot again. Lol. Jk. Put that is one weird pic.
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