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Take to heart, and keep in mind,
Flashbacks, and the constant gaze,
As it was then I did not know,
The truth of the beat
of my once cold heart.

The thirst I beheld,
to behold the holding
of my attention,
the grasp
of an enraptured obsession.

Pure, so true, by definition,
Defying the rules laid down by conformity,
spitting back into its face
the requisites of ungratefulness
hindered by the lack of sight.

Yet I saw the blessings
Wrapped with bows
In a marathon to my eyes,
Unscathed by bumps in the road,
Unharmed by my jagged edges...

Take to heart, and keep in mind,
the constant gaze and visual marathon,
Set me free, this God given blessing...
My once cold heart
is now and forever set aflame

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Time goes by, and I only end up loving her more and more with every second.

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*roselynedwards Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
Unscathed by bumps in the road,
Unharmed by my jagged edges...

Best lines :)

I'm unsure as to what set the cold heart aflame was it God, or the God given blessing?
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Mood: Glad ~GrubbsWriting Nov 26, 2012  Professional Writer
God Given Blessing
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*roselynedwards Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
oh ok :) im sorry im a little slow sometimes
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~GrubbsWriting Nov 26, 2012  Professional Writer
haha so am I it's ok :P
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*roselynedwards Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
thanks :P i feel better now.
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*AutumsMoon Nov 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is beautiful. Wonderful job.
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:icondarthsithari:
Wait, loving who more?
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~GrubbsWriting Nov 25, 2012  Professional Writer
my girlfriend lol
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