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Take to heart, and keep in mind,
Flashbacks, and the constant gaze,
As it was then I did not know,
The truth of the beat
of my once cold heart.

The thirst I beheld,
to behold the holding
of my attention,
the grasp
of an enraptured obsession.

Pure, so true, by definition,
Defying the rules laid down by conformity,
spitting back into its face
the requisites of ungratefulness
hindered by the lack of sight.

Yet I saw the blessings
Wrapped with bows
In a marathon to my eyes,
Unscathed by bumps in the road,
Unharmed by my jagged edges...

Take to heart, and keep in mind,
the constant gaze and visual marathon,
Set me free, this God given blessing...
My once cold heart
is now and forever set aflame
Time goes by, and I only end up loving her more and more with every second.

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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
Unscathed by bumps in the road,
Unharmed by my jagged edges...

Best lines :)

I'm unsure as to what set the cold heart aflame was it God, or the God given blessing?
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
God Given Blessing
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
oh ok :) im sorry im a little slow sometimes
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha so am I it's ok :P
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roselynedwards Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Writer
thanks :P i feel better now.
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AutumsMoon Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012   Traditional Artist
This is beautiful. Wonderful job.
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DarthSithari Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Wait, loving who more?
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
my girlfriend lol
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