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My endless imperfections
shout to the very core of my soul,
Beating away at my humility,
To bare reminder
that I do not deserve you
in the slightest...
Grace is your very essence,
as you embody that which is perfection.
Whereas my rush
to find the flaws of my name,
You tell it tales true,
of the feelings you hold.
Abnormal is my persona,
and infinite apologies are due,
Many thanks, just as much,
are in order...
To God, to you....
Beauty be what has enraptured my heart
for the eternal hour at hand,
You and only you are the whom
that I most desire,But never deserve.
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TheiaMaby Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi, I'm from the Group Holmes Consultants

I fell in love with this poem, not just because it is so well written, has a perfect rhythm and a great stile...
It seems like it comes from hart! Sometimes we feel like unworthy idiots, next to the ones we love. Sometimes we admire them so much, that they seem unearthly and heavenly. This is just my interpretation... :)
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BellaGBear Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hmm can relate to the feelings of the poem. You portrayed good the feeling of feeling unworthy
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kendrahutchison Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This really is very beautiful.
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graw136 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Made me go "Awwwwww!" That is so good, i'm gonna bookmark it because it's that good.
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polarbeardog2 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It is a moving piece for me.
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Eclips-ing Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
This is excellent! It went extremely smooth, and the choice of wording is perfect. I must say I really love this! Especially this part:

Grace is your very essence,
as you embody that which is perfection.
Whereas my rush
to find the flaws of my name,
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