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Hear them, those voices in mind.
Heed them, those ideas they speak

I have felt the hands of those voices, in the wake of my choices.
I have heard them laughing at me in my shambled mind.

Those voices are not mine,
Nor were they ever...

I was not born with them,
But they came to me in weakness.

Attracted to the scent of my flawed being,
the aura of my imperfection.

The voices of, my rotten conscious,
Overtaken by shame and regret.

I have heard them screaming
at me in my shackled mind...
From the point of view of a suffering schizophrenic.
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DarthSithari Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
This is me on a really, REALLY, bad day.
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RavenTheShinigami7 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I must say... This is pretty realistic... Seeing as I have Schizophrenia...
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my, how long since you were diagnosed my friend?
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RavenTheShinigami7 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Childhood.when I was about 7 years old.
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GrubbsWriting Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow...I would love to know more, but I fear I would be getting to personal haha. However, you're in my prayers and I hope that my work continues to touch you. If you would ever like to talk, feel free to message me on here
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RavenTheShinigami7 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^^
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